Overall, not bad, but there is room for improvement.
Most of the h-scenes feel the same, going about 4 or 5 times in a row, she's always "losing her mind," and (for me) too much of the ahegao face. It is almost every girl, every time.
What is the point of a harem if they all seem like the same (barring visuals)?
Also, you don't need a "a few moments later" screen for every transition. Let the writing speak for itself. If a character says, "We should be there by nightfall." Then the next screen can just be them arriving at night. We (the audience) will understand the implied passage of time. Save specific transition screens for large jumps, like when the story jumped ahead a few weeks while they were dealing with the dungeon outbreak (that worked very well).
There is a lot here that is good, and could be great. And of course, this is just one person's opinion; take it for what you will.
No matter what, keep going, keep writing, keep creating. :)
Genuinely one of the best games I have ever played. Storyline, amazing. Characters, amazing. Physics, amazing. Please keep this game and many more coming. Best game released in the last year hands down.
Just started this game and I've already had enough. It IS a good looking game and the renders are great, so if that's all you want then play it.
BUT the women are incredibly one dimensional and poorly written (at least the three I encountered before I realized the author has probably never met one). The main character is also a total creep and it makes it hard to self-insert.
Hard to comment on anything else because I could not have been more emotionally unattached to everything before I decided to stop playing. In need of a major rewrite.
I recently started this game and im loving it. However, i noticed i didnt unlock all the female characters with the “path” i chosen (basically missing the last one, helena I believe?) just wonder am I fked?
I think the whole slavery subplot is a bit too horrible for this kind of game and should be cut or adjusted. I know the developer tried hard to work around it in thw writing but this all could have easily be replaced with something more toned down. Also even referencing referencing the illegal brothels that allow killing slaves? Like seriously why have all this in an otherwise lighthearted game?
I think a lot of people, including me, can get severely disgusted by all that and just drop the game. Just a bunch of text tweaks without much changes would make it much better.
Please don't put really triggering concepts or disgusting violent fetishes into your game. There is already so many horrible and borderline evil content on Itch that having a genuinely well made lighhearted game would be great.
This is a great game. However, I dont do subscriptions. It'd be way better if you charged a one time fee for the exclusive scenes instead of blocking out most people with lame patreon. Once the game is fully complete and if you add the exclusive stuff to the complete build, I will be happy to buy it. Best of luck.
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Overall, not bad, but there is room for improvement.
Most of the h-scenes feel the same, going about 4 or 5 times in a row, she's always "losing her mind," and (for me) too much of the ahegao face. It is almost every girl, every time.
What is the point of a harem if they all seem like the same (barring visuals)?
Also, you don't need a "a few moments later" screen for every transition. Let the writing speak for itself. If a character says, "We should be there by nightfall." Then the next screen can just be them arriving at night. We (the audience) will understand the implied passage of time. Save specific transition screens for large jumps, like when the story jumped ahead a few weeks while they were dealing with the dungeon outbreak (that worked very well).
There is a lot here that is good, and could be great. And of course, this is just one person's opinion; take it for what you will.
No matter what, keep going, keep writing, keep creating. :)
Hello, on Patreon Does the follower member also have access to exclusive in-game scenes? Thanks.
i don't do paypal. guess i'll buy something else.
Neat
Genuinely one of the best games I have ever played. Storyline, amazing. Characters, amazing. Physics, amazing. Please keep this game and many more coming. Best game released in the last year hands down.
Just started this game and I've already had enough. It IS a good looking game and the renders are great, so if that's all you want then play it.
BUT the women are incredibly one dimensional and poorly written (at least the three I encountered before I realized the author has probably never met one). The main character is also a total creep and it makes it hard to self-insert.
Hard to comment on anything else because I could not have been more emotionally unattached to everything before I decided to stop playing. In need of a major rewrite.
I can't believe you're actually charging money for this when the English text quality is so low.
I recently started this game and im loving it. However, i noticed i didnt unlock all the female characters with the “path” i chosen (basically missing the last one, helena I believe?) just wonder am I fked?
I think the whole slavery subplot is a bit too horrible for this kind of game and should be cut or adjusted. I know the developer tried hard to work around it in thw writing but this all could have easily be replaced with something more toned down. Also even referencing referencing the illegal brothels that allow killing slaves? Like seriously why have all this in an otherwise lighthearted game?
I think a lot of people, including me, can get severely disgusted by all that and just drop the game. Just a bunch of text tweaks without much changes would make it much better.
Please don't put really triggering concepts or disgusting violent fetishes into your game. There is already so many horrible and borderline evil content on Itch that having a genuinely well made lighhearted game would be great.
This is a great game. However, I dont do subscriptions. It'd be way better if you charged a one time fee for the exclusive scenes instead of blocking out most people with lame patreon. Once the game is fully complete and if you add the exclusive stuff to the complete build, I will be happy to buy it. Best of luck.