Starting with the good: obviously the graphics, the design, the animations and overall looks of the whole thing - they are all great. One of the most high quality VNs in that regard. The world has potential, the overall story is pretty interesting and makes sense, but...
The pacing is terrible, way too fast, way to many plots happening right after another without any nice transitions. It seems like a story-heavy game and then it just goes right for the insta-sex tropes, which fails at both "NSFW game types". And about sex - it's the classic "every woman instantly falls for the protagonist and wants to fuck him" trope. No foreplay, no build-up, "I just met you, please fuck me".
And characters need work too I'm afraid... everyone loves a good character developement - a shy girl starting to stand her ground, a rough girl lowering her defences, a once-a-slave, now all-powerful girl, but these characters are all very one-dimensional for now and that also bugs me
And I really say that as a constructive critique, cause the game has a lot of potential, but characters are shallow and the pacing is unsatisfacotory at best. I hope to see it grow and strive, I really do.
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Genuine, honest, no-harm-intended opinion:
Starting with the good: obviously the graphics, the design, the animations and overall looks of the whole thing - they are all great. One of the most high quality VNs in that regard. The world has potential, the overall story is pretty interesting and makes sense, but...
The pacing is terrible, way too fast, way to many plots happening right after another without any nice transitions. It seems like a story-heavy game and then it just goes right for the insta-sex tropes, which fails at both "NSFW game types". And about sex - it's the classic "every woman instantly falls for the protagonist and wants to fuck him" trope. No foreplay, no build-up, "I just met you, please fuck me".
And characters need work too I'm afraid... everyone loves a good character developement - a shy girl starting to stand her ground, a rough girl lowering her defences, a once-a-slave, now all-powerful girl, but these characters are all very one-dimensional for now and that also bugs me
And I really say that as a constructive critique, cause the game has a lot of potential, but characters are shallow and the pacing is unsatisfacotory at best. I hope to see it grow and strive, I really do.
An embarrasingly long review for a porn game...